KS3 · English

Writing a poetry comparison paragraph

'Poem A is sad. Poem B is hopeful.' Two sentences, and not one bit of comparing yet. Stick around: one small word changes that.

English · Poetry

Which job does each word do?

Pick a word, then choose its job: does it show a similarity, show a difference, or signpost the argument?

Still to sort

Shows a similarity (0)

Links two ideas to show what the poems share.

Where the line is: These point to what the poems have in common. The difference words do the opposite, and the signposts don't compare at all.

Shows a difference (0)

Links two ideas to show how the poems differ.

Where the line is: These set one poem against the other. They are easy to mix up with the signposts because both groups can sit at the start of a sentence.

Signposts the argument (0)

Helps the reader follow where you are.

Where the line is: These don't compare anything. They tell the reader where each part of your argument begins and ends.

13 of 13 still to sort.

A comparative paragraph runs on linking words, but they don't all do the same job. Pick a word, then pick the job you think it does. The reason appears straight away.

Two ways to build the essay

One poem after the othervsInterspersed

Same two poems, same question. Only the plan changes.

Focus

How the essay is organised

One poem after the other

Introduction, then all of Poem A, then all of Poem B, then a conclusion

Interspersed

Introduction with the thesis, then what the poems say, then form and structure, then language, then a conclusion

The insight

The interspersed model gives each paragraph a job. Poems need not be dealt with separately: an essay can instead be split thematically or by methods.

Where the comparing happens

One poem after the other

Poems are dealt with separately

Interspersed

The comparison is interspersed throughout the essay

Weight given to each poem

One poem after the other

Each poem gets its own stretch of the essay

Interspersed

Equal weight to both poems

What the comparisons build

One poem after the other

Two sections, one per poem

Interspersed

Comparisons that lead towards an argument as a whole

English · Thesis statements

Does this thesis have what it needs?

The question is: 'How do the poems present memory?' Tick every feature each imaginary thesis statement has, then check the grid.

Poet A's 'Poem A' and Poet B's 'Poem B' both present memory as lasting, but A finds comfort in it and B a weight, which shows how remembering shapes lives.
Poem A and Poem B are both about memory.
Poet A and Poet B use very different tones in 'Poem A' and 'Poem B'.
Poet A and Poet B present memory differently, which says something about how people live.

English · Topic sentences

What makes a topic sentence comparative?

Your question is 'How do the poems present memory?' and you are about to write the topic sentence of your first paragraph.

Which idea is closest to what you think right now?
How sure are you?

English · Punctuation

Find the line with the wrong punctuation

This paragraph answers 'How do the poems present change?' Every line is fine except one, where a linking word has been punctuated wrongly. Which line is it?

A student's paragraph — which line goes wrong?

English · Your turn

Write the paragraph

Outline (Poem A and Poem B are imaginary poems) - Device in both poems: a repeated line - Poem A: the repeated line returns at the end and feels soothing, so memory is a comfort - Poem B: the repeated line returns at the end and feels inescapable, so memory is a weight - Purpose: Poet A wants readers to find comfort in remembering; Poet B wants readers to feel its weight

Use the outline to write one comparative paragraph that answers 'How do the poems present memory?' Write it first, then tick off what you managed. [5 marks]

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WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED

A quick recap of today's lesson.

Turn two descriptions into one argument, using the right linking words.

What you need to know

  • An analytical essay is at its core an argument, so every point should focus on the central theme of the question.
  • An interspersed essay runs the comparison all the way through, giving equal weight to both poems and leading towards one argument.
  • A comparative thesis names both writers and poems, links to the question, asserts similarities and differences, and says how this relates to the bigger picture.
  • A comparative topic sentence names one point of comparison, links to the question, and opens with a comparative conjunction such as 'While both'.
  • Two separate statements about each poem, with no comparative conjunction or discourse marker, are not a comparative topic sentence.
  • Have a goSam writes 'Poem A uses repetition. Poem B uses repetition.' and is very sure it's a comparative topic sentence. What is Sam's version missing?

    A comparative conjunction, such as 'While both'. It is just two separate statements.

    A comparative topic sentence holds one point of comparison in a single thought; two statements with no comparative conjunction or discourse marker don't.

  • Similarly, likewise and equally show similarities; in contrast and whereas show differences.
  • When similarly, likewise, equally or in contrast links two sentences, use a semicolon, then the linking word, then a comma.
  • Have a goAdd the missing punctuation: Poem A ends on a question similarly Poem B ends on a question.

    Poem A ends on a question; similarly, Poem B ends on a question.

    Between two sentences the pattern is semicolon, linking word, comma. A bare space leaves out two of the three.

  • Discourse markers such as initially, furthermore, consequently, thus and in conclusion signpost your argument so the reader can follow it.
  • Pick a device that appears in both poems and compare how each poet uses it, using inference phrases such as 'this suggests'.
  • End the paragraph with a concluding sentence focused on the writer's purpose that gestures back to the question's overall theme.
  • Have a goA pupil's concluding sentence reads 'So Poem A and Poem B are different.' Which two things from this list is it still missing?

    A focus on the writer's purpose, and a nod back to the overall theme of the question.

    A concluding sentence summarises the paragraph with a clear focus on the writer's purpose and gestures back to the question's overall theme.

The big picture

A comparative paragraph is one argument about two poems at once. You will sort the linking words by their job, see how an interspersed essay is built, check a thesis statement, fix a punctuation slip and then write a full comparative paragraph yourself.

Key points

1A comparative paragraph is one argument about two poems, not two descriptions side by side.
2The right linking word tells the reader whether you are showing a similarity, showing a difference or signposting.
3Between two sentences, similarly, likewise, equally and in contrast take a semicolon before and a comma after.
4Compare how each poet uses the same device, and use inference phrases to show you are analysing.
5Finish with a concluding sentence about the writer's purpose that points back to the question.

Worked example

Problem

A pupil writes: 'Poem A is sad. Poem B is hopeful.' Turn it into one sentence that holds both poems in a single thought.

⚠ Watch out

Writing one sentence about each poem and thinking that counts as comparing. Without a comparative conjunction such as 'While both', or a linking word, the sentences just sit side by side, and two separate statements are not a comparative topic sentence.

🧠

Memory hook

Two poems, one thought. If a sentence can't hold both poems at once, it needs a linking word.

✓

Check yourself

Link 'Poem A has a regular rhythm' and 'Poem B has an irregular rhythm' using 'in contrast'. Punctuate it correctly, then say what the linking word shows.

Flashcards

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What does a comparative response do?
It judges the similarities and differences between one thing and another.
What is an analytical essay at its core, and what should every point do?
An argument. Every point should focus on the central theme of the question and aim to show that your interpretation is the most valid.
What does interspersing the comparison give an essay?
Equal weight to both poems, with comparisons that lead towards an argument as a whole.
What four features does a comparative thesis statement have?
It names both writers and poems, links to the question, asserts similarities and differences, and says how this relates to the bigger picture.
What does a comparative topic sentence do?
States a specific point of comparison between the poems, links to the question and the thesis, and summarises the paragraph's idea concisely.
Which linking words show similarities?
Similarly, likewise and equally.
Which linking words show differences?
In contrast and whereas.
How do you punctuate similarly, likewise, equally or in contrast between two sentences?
A semicolon after the first sentence, then the linking word, then a comma before the second sentence.
Why is 'whereas' not punctuated with the semicolon pattern?
It joins two clauses within one sentence rather than linking two sentences.
What are discourse markers for? Name four.
They signpost the argument so the reader can follow it and see where each part begins and ends. For example: initially, furthermore, consequently, thus, in conclusion.
Name three phrases that show inference and analysis.
'This suggests', 'implies' and 'emphasises'. Also: 'the use of a device reveals or demonstrates' and 'the writer effectively conveys'.
In a paragraph on language or structure, what do you pick and what do you compare?
Pick a device that appears in both poems and compare how each poet uses it to create different meanings and effects for the reader.
What does a concluding sentence do?
It summarises the paragraph with a clear focus on the writer's purpose and gestures back to the overall theme of the question.

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